I Love You - Poetry Gong #10
I love you.
I start small,
speak to the peaches.
No flowers
hiding my face
roses leading
for me. Just three
short syllables, grapes
rolling down a throat
choking the owner,
a girl or a man shopping
for fresh fruit, Sam the Butcher’s
best meat. Grilling
the enemy burns
bridges. Say I love
you to pieces
of beef, veal cutlets.
Chicken kabobs kick
start conversations
daily here at the market.
Aisle of ewe. Olive
juice. Circle an onion
uncover the sweetest
avocado. I love you.
When the fruits,
the meat and the vegetables,
are thrashing in your basket
mating in exotic
combinations, look away.
When the bag boy asks
paper or plastic, say
I love you.
Leave him watching the orgy.
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This poem is in response to this: http://mygorgeoussomewhere.org/2008/10/20/i-love-you-poets-getting-over-themselves/#comment-4311
Note to self: it may be stronger with a "you" instead of an "I." Actually, it kind of shifts perspective. Hmm...
Labels: grocery shopping, love poem, poetry gong
2 Comments:
This is so fantastic. Really. I find the grocery store to be inspiring.
You've just taken supermarketology to a new level. Aisle of ewe... Phew!
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