jillypoet: mom trying to write

Each day I wish I had invented waterproof sticky notes (for shower inspiration) or pen-friendly diapers to get down all my quirky thoughts that I am sure are relevant and publishable. And so God (actually another writer-mommy) sent me The Blog.

Monday, January 19, 2009

In An Effort to be More Spiritual While the Children Watch Disney

She Prays Like Wonder Woman

This is what I would like strangers
to say about me. She is a prayer

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Anonymous Anonymous said...

"... This rag/
a haven, a thread-bare four walls,/
its tattered hood a roof over my head."

i'm so glad you wrote this. i'd been waiting and waiting for my next jillypoem fix.

and the last line is spectacular: "When I shiver, the words come out crooked."

(sorry not be more eloquent. you know my brain is fried. but i like it. i like it.)


8:59 PM  
Blogger Cynthia said...

Hi Jilly, authentic writing, as
if I'm inside the head of a
woman on the verge of some
dark, late awakening.

9:40 PM  
Anonymous one more believer said...

i absolutely love this... i use to dream abt becoming a homeless woman... to wander the streets in wonder... you have described it perfectly....

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