Things of Note, Beyond the Casual Glance: NaPo #3
Squirrels smart enough to turn around.
A cat with three legs,
teaching you how to climb a massive silver maple.
A lone blond child, spinning in wet leaves to a song
sung with words only she knows.
Making up your own language.
The poem whispered to a gray squirrel,
an old robin
and a fresh nuthatch
from the other side of a window.
Invitations to a party
written in crayon, two pennies taped inside.
How the seamless glide of new scissors on old fabric
renders a hand weightless, without muscle.
A morning spent counting dust motes in a sunbeam.
Gathering dust motes like fireflies in a jar.
Lighting a room with a canning jar full of nothing.
Leaving your front door wide open while you shop for groceries.
Feeding strangers bananas straight from a brown paper grocery sack.
Slipping through a crowd of familiars
without saying a word.
A simple sigh of relief on the other side.
Labels: list poem, NaPoWriMo, pillow book
9 Comments:
"How the seamless glide of new scissors on old fabric
renders a hand weightless, without muscle." AND
"A morning spent counting dust motes in a sunbeam." AND
"Slipping through a crowd of familiars
without saying a word" wow...what imagery!
Great imagery, yes! Good work, jilly. Only 27 more to go....
i like "feeding strangers bananas straight from a brown paper grocery sack."
I also loved "How the seamless glide of new scissors on old fabric
renders a hand weightless, without muscle." I know exactly how that feels! Love how you call on all the senses for this.
The familiars line is so beautiful.
So many lovely thoughts and images, written in a delicate voice. An invitation to a day.
Your tree is amazing. Was kitty searching for a squirrel?
how incredibly beautiful, the imagery is so fantastic :)
This is lovely, every moment so vividly described, resonates with deeper experience.
Thank you, everyone! The picture is of my cat, Lena, the three-legged cat with about 6 lives left. I'm not sure if she was after a squirrel or a bird or just proving that she can still climb trees!
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